Dear Ms Sanderson,
I am writing to give you my comments on your magazines.
First of all, I think it would be a good idea to publish a style magazine for teenagers.The reason is that teenagers enjoy reading magazines. So, if teenagers read the magazine, it will be successful.
Secondly, I think the magazine should come out weekly because teenagers buy magazines every week.Most teenagers enjoy reading magazines about fashion and body image. So, it should have these two topics.
Finally, you asked me about TEEN HOBBIES magazine. I am afraid to say, I do not like the topics and the most important thing is it does not have pictures. If the magazines does not have pictures, it will be such a flop.
I hope these comments and suggestions are helpful.I am writing to give you my comments on your magazines.
First of all, I think it would be a good idea to publish a style magazine for teenagers.The reason is that teenagers enjoy reading magazines. So, if teenagers read the magazine, it will be successful.
Secondly, I think the magazine should come out weekly because teenagers buy magazines every week.Most teenagers enjoy reading magazines about fashion and body image. So, it should have these two topics.
Finally, you asked me about TEEN HOBBIES magazine. I am afraid to say, I do not like the topics and the most important thing is it does not have pictures. If the magazines does not have pictures, it will be such a flop.
Yours sincerely,
Christos Babis
